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1 Copywriting Tip
Tip: Use Misdirection in your Headline
I'm a fan of stand-up comedy.
And now that I'm a full-time writer, I kinda get why I'm so into it.
It's because of stand-up comedy's heavy reliance on writing.
Humor writing, rather.
You cannot be a good stand-up comedian without being a funny writer.
And that's where today's copywriting tip comes from.
You see...humor writing works on the principle of set-up and punchline.
→You set up a situation.
→Engage the audience's interest.
→Deliver the joke in a punchline form.
Everybody laughs. Win!
Now think...
If your headline can be like that too.
A set-up and punchline.
Only difference? Misdirection.
Instead of a linear set-up and punchline, you take a different route.
By going from set-up to punchline in an unexpected way, you create surprise. And that surprise creates laughter.
That different route you took is what misdirection is.
Want to use it in your headline?
Remember this rule...👇🏻
First line grabs attention.
Second line eases the tension.
Now onto some great examples...
2 Examples
1. Wilson’s Dog Food
The headline opens with a controversial statement.
Then eases the tension.
The perfect example of a set-up + punchline with a twist of misdirection.
And it makes the reader smile to they are more likely to remember it.
And if they are more likely to remember it, they are more likely to buy it.
2. Range Rover
Another classic ad from RR that I love.
First line makes you feel like this ad will be about some return policy feature.
Second line leads you into the misdirection with style.
And I like how on-brand this is.
If you want to focus on the rugged nature of your SUV, giving your customer the ultimate confidence booster is the way to do it.
3 Tactics for You
1. Choose an Unexpected Association
Associate your product or service with something unexpected or unrelated in the first line, creating intrigue.
Follow up with the second line that smoothly connects the unexpected element to the core message.
Like the RR example.
2. Begin with a Contradictory Statement
Begin with a statement that contradicts common beliefs or expectations in your society.
The second line can then provide context or a surprising explanation.
Like the dog food ad example.
3. Assumption Reversal
Start with a statement that plays on common assumptions.
Then reverse it in the second line to reveal a different perspective or benefit.
"Ditch the gym for a beach body.
I danced my way to fit into a bikini"
-Potential Ad for Dance Fitness Classes by X
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